Just a Dream

Becareful of love & it's theives
 don't be blinded by the kiss
 charm will drag you in
 flurtatious curves will tear you apart
 & when you think your balanced 
 you look around
 all the emotional mess
 has left your heart dancing
 like a rock & roller drunk
 reckless & spellbound your love is stolen
 given into desire the touch the kiss the smell the look
 love has got you tangled & hooked
 for mercy you beg, for pleasures you plead
 all your fantasy is just a dream..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/10/2013 11:00:00 AM
Some nice words of wisdom here... :o)
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Date: 1/7/2013 6:53:00 PM
Thieves like us, a song by new order. This poem reminds me of that song, damn now I have to listen to it. I also enjoyed this poem. I guess I'm becoming a fan.
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Date: 1/5/2013 12:05:00 PM
Very Nice.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 1/4/2013 7:04:00 AM
i LIKE TO THINK FANTASY CAN BECOME REALITY I SUPOSE ENJOY THE MOMENT WHILE IT LASTS I ASK YOU AS I HAVE BEEN HEART TO SOMANY TIMES CAN YOU TAME A SAVAGED HEART IM GOING ON AGAIN LOVE YOUR WRITE XX DAVIDSCOTT
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