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Just a Dream

Polar opposites, as all hope quits. over oceans afar, Under the same stars. She silently sits. My heart still ajar. Accepting, hearing, as I'm veering. Actually listening. eyes glistening. I finally stop fearing, Begin questioning. I can finally leave, my blade in his sheath. Hopes are renewed, healing things chewed,. on this Friday's eve. emotions so rude. Sit in the back, for things I lack, but know you're here, shedding many a tear. Upon my mind you tack, Hope is where you steer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/4/2024 3:50:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/12/2016 10:56:00 PM
CURTIS, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/8/2011 12:35:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week, rgds Janette
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserving poem being featured this week Curtis. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2011 4:37:00 AM
Excellently accomplished. Love your rhyming and rhythm in this beautiful poem. A heartfelt conclusion!
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