Notes About The Poem

Just

Simply a leaf.  
Falling from a maple tree. 
Floating down in circles.  
Briefly flying free.  

Weightless and empty. 
Swaying in the open air.  
Under the spell of time.  
Feeling no care.  

Now softly landing. 
In the moment, an eternity.  
Peaceful, still and content.  
Grateful to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ekwobi Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 2:33 AM
Sometimes calmly watching plants and their leaves sharply confronts man with his vain worries. An eternal lesson for us!
Corns Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:37 PM
Thank you, yes. That calm centers me.
Stephenson Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 6:24 AM
Awesome. I fell into character with the leaf.
Corns Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:35 PM
Great! That is what I was hoping for in the read. I even re-read it often to remind myself of that loose, peaceful feeling.
Morris Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 3:58 PM
Lovely poem, Alex. Blessings. :-)
Corns Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:33 PM
Thank you very much. Blessings to you too. I am glad you like it.
Hensley Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:42 PM
Very beautiful and had great imagery! please keep up the great writing looking forward to see some more from you.
Corns Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Thank you very much and I really appreciate the encouragement. I will try to write more.
Davis Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:14 PM
Truly beautiful ?? ?? ??
Corns Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:31 PM
Thank you. I do think it's a beautiful thing to live in the moment.
Meadows Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:27 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Corns Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:29 PM
Thank you! It took a lot of staring out our back windows to write it, I'm glad you enjoy it.
Hoffman Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 1:05 PM
What a lovely visual. Beautifully written piece, Alex.
Corns Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:28 PM
Thank you very much. I hope it won't be long before I see new leaves on our trees again (in MD).
Kaufman Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 5:45 AM
what lovely imagery. I followed you're leaf in my mind's eye.
Corns Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 6:25 PM
Thank you, I’m glad my words rang true with you.
Watkin Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Enjoyed reading. Thanks
Corns Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Thank you very much.
Rone Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 12:04 PM
Well done Alex. Its simplicity took me back. Are leaves now falling at your home. they are just budding here! - Best - Ken
Corns Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Thank you. In Maryland I enjoyed them again this year just like last year - so gentle.
One Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 11:31 AM
Great imagery expressed in your words..
Corns Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 8:51 AM
Thank you very much. I watch the leaves fall every day out our windows. It is the time of year here to enjoy that simple pleasure.
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