Junkyard Garden

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through lean years
in this thing called life
i’ve tended to my garden
erected walls with what i could
made a shelter called it mine

i filled each corner
in convoluted ways
with memories and fantasies
along the way weeds got the best of me

my garden looks more like a junkyard
a roadmap of regrets discarded 
scruffy trails of abandoned rejects
milestone remnants of betrayals

sometimes i meander
thru the backlanes of my mind
both the garden and the junkyard 
intermingling in a unique form of art
it’s messy but i claim it as my own



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~IN THE GARDEN OF MY FANTASY~ 2023

Read on air by invitation  ~  January 16, 2022  'POETS HARBOUR'

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on October 5, 2019 for contest MY FAVORITE JUNKYARD sponsored by CRAIG CORNISH  -  RANKED 12TH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/3/2019 8:20:00 AM
Line, I love your analogy or jux of garden to junkyard which makes it truly poetic.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/3/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Craig, for your lovely compliment.
Date: 11/2/2019 10:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line. You are right, we need to own up our garden and junkyard.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/2/2019 10:49:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Subimal.
Date: 11/2/2019 9:38:00 PM
back to say congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/2/2019 9:51:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/2/2019 7:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line, in My Favorite Junkyard. Hugs Eve
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/2/2019 9:52:00 PM
Thanks Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/2/2019 4:14:00 PM
It's yours and that's all that matters. Congrats in your win lovely Line x:)-luloo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/2/2019 9:52:00 PM
LOL Thanks, LuLoo.
Date: 10/6/2019 12:27:00 AM
Line, What a garden it is, truly. Wouldn't have it any other way. -Richard
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/6/2019 7:00:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Richard.
Date: 10/5/2019 9:51:00 PM
Your junkyard sounds like mine too :) Bless you and all the best in the contest. Prayers, Gina
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2019 10:54:00 PM
Yes our junkyards have a lot in common, Gina.
Date: 10/5/2019 5:16:00 PM
Wow, this is a great one ! Well expressed and creative Line :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2019 6:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely compliment, Heidi.
Date: 10/5/2019 3:02:00 PM
great entry for the contest Line, love where you went with this one! nice penning :) hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2019 3:30:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. I enjoyed the challenge.
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