Junipers

Coniferous greenery holds up the hill and my eyes. Snakes wind around the roots, and my boots, if I’m not careful. Replaced junipers with a weeping willow and stone wall.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/1/2025 7:42:00 AM

Great imagery in your story Kim. Congratulations! :)

Ink Empress

Date: 6/26/2025 8:04:00 AM

Creative and very unique interpretation of the prompt dear kim. I especially love the second line with internal rhymes and how it flows so well! Well written! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2025 2:14:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Terry Miller

Date: 6/26/2025 7:38:00 AM

Interesting Sijo, congratulations

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2025 2:14:00 PM

Thank you, Terry!

Jim Healey

Date: 6/25/2025 8:13:00 AM

Lovely description, Kim. Fortunately, we have no snakes where I live! Congrats. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2025 10:29:00 AM

Rarely see them but they are there. Thank you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/24/2025 1:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Junipers" write. No snakes for me. Have a blessed day with your win................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2025 10:29:00 AM

Thank you, Paula!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2025 1:31:00 PM

I love that part "holds up the hill and my eyes" So cool, Kim. Congrats in my contest

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2025 10:29:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/10/2025 4:38:00 PM

Thoughtful, descriptive approach to the prompt, Kim. Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2025 5:33:00 PM

Thank you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/10/2025 4:01:00 AM

I agree with Paige, Kim, that is an interesting poem. I wonder how high that stone wall happens to be. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2025 4:36:00 AM

It is not high. It is just on the corner of our lot, shared between our driveway and our neighbors. They kept their junipers. Fence is not at the bottom and is more of an accent wall, perhaps keeps soul from erosion.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/9/2025 6:18:00 PM

Interesting gardening poem- "lift up hills and my eyes"

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 6:54:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend!