June Waves

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June sound waves are breathtakingly glittery. Waves build avid foam on sandy coasts till blistery. Avian creatures while they slumber, are still jittery While the blossoming flora spreads its mystery. Anemones and coral reefs show Earth's history. Written: June 4, 2023

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Paige Hind

Date: 6/4/2023 3:50:00 PM

Clever and I love the last line. :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/4/2023 1:19:00 PM

I have always been intrigued by the moons effect with tides and hence with our planet LASAAD, but when we know planet earth rotates 24 hours (one day), of course change in nature will occur. Even flora spreads its mystery and creatures whilst slumbering are still jittery .Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. BRILLIANT poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2023 10:38:00 AM

- June is filled with sound, smells and mystery ... a lovely poem, Las - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 6/4/2023 9:50:00 AM

Welcome June when everything in nature awakes. Nicely penned.