June Love

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June Love Loveliest time of year for love is June Enkindling a spark in the heart once froze Who wouldn’t melt at last for paths in rose strewn? Loveliest time of year for love is June. Dancing beneath lustrous silvery moon Dressed to thrill in fragrant rose petal clothes Loveliest time of year for love is June Enkindling a spark in the heart once froze. Who wouldn’t melt at last for paths in rose strewn? Loveliest time of year for love is June Dancing beneath lustrous silvery moon Dressed to thrill in fragrant rose petal clothes. Enkindling a spark in the heart once froze A heart zooming heavenward as love grows. * * * 6th June 2021 This is my first attempt at writing a Trionet in the style of a sonnet.

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/8/2021 8:06:00 AM

A true beauty LOVE SURVIVES PANDEMICS. A PANDEMIC IS ALL OVER.)) Live and love, Pangie xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/8/2021 11:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Pangie, love survives, deceased or alive, not even a pandemic can destroy love, it’s an unbreakable bond written in stars up above… Bless you ~ Belle

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/8/2021 12:03:00 AM

I like this one, Carol, June is a month of great possibilities, you have penned well:)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/8/2021 1:33:00 AM

Thank you Jo, June is a wonderful month and the weather has been beautiful so far here this year… Belle

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/7/2021 9:53:00 AM

WoW! Belle, You penned such a lovely verse. I’m a hopeless romantic, so I enjoy poems about love. I agree June( summertime) is a good time for love to bloom. Stellar content, imagery and rhymes.Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day. Soupmail

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/7/2021 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Alexis, for the lovely words (and the Soupmail)… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/6/2021 11:10:00 PM

You cannot come to Malta because of the pandemic, or you would see what this poem portrays.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/7/2021 1:39:00 AM

I’ve never been to Malta Victor, but from what I’ve seen on tv and magazines it’s absolutely beautiful. Malta in June, how wonderful. Thank you, Belle