June 2

He sat in his room. It was a moderate winter's eve. In the past, he might have written such things as "And he spilled the contents of his tortured psyche onto the page", but now he had become more refined concerning his depressive episodes; a much more cynical writer on this date, this moderate winter's eve. He would rather write "He sat in his room. It was a moderate winter's eve. In the past, he might have written such things as "And he spilled the contents of his tortured psyche onto the page", but now he had become more refined concerning his depressive episodes; a much more cynical writer on this date, this moderate winter's eve. He would rather write "He sat in his room. It was a moderate winter's eve. In the past, he might have written such things as "And he spilled the contents of his tortured psyche onto the page", but now he had become more refined concerning his depressive episodes; a much more cynical writer on this date, this moderate winter's eve. He would rather write something else.

So, he got out of his chair and decorated the ground outside and below with a generous splash of red. It was decidedly his last creation; a message that ended up being somewhat abstract. Hardly worth the ink, that 'something else'. ",  but as he was viciously writing, he was stricken by a terrifying interruption - screaming: approaching from above. His apartment was for a moment shadowed by the source, and then a thump. 

Realising what had happened, he raced out of his apartment and downstairs to see if the source had survived.", which he felt to be a much better expression of his perpetual state. Quite satisfied with the apparent improvement in the maturity of his writing, he duly laid down his pen and proceeded to his bed.

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Date: 6/5/2015 12:05:00 AM
Vincent, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/3/2015 12:46:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first poems here at P-Soup - A pleasure to welcome you, Vincent :) - Hope you will find this page interesting and post many more thoughts and words in the future - Good luck :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/3/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 6/2/2015 10:07:00 PM
Vincent, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/2/2015 3:29:00 PM
Hey Vincent, Welcome to Poetry Soup. This is a very introspective piece expressed with such fervor. I look forward to more from you. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 6/3/2015 1:28:00 PM
Thank you, Neva! I'm pleased it caught enough of your interest for you to leave a comment. Be more blessed! Vince.
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