Premiere Contest WinnerJune 1944

JUNE 1944

they kissed with dreams of peace in clover - for him fulfilled in Norman field

Monoku - Cliche: All’s fair in love and war
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Roper Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Beautiful one liner monoku,,, congratulations on your win! hugs eve
Richards Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 5:29 PM
Excellent first place poem !! Wow !
Brewer Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 10:45 PM
Thank you, Carrie.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful trophy win Geoffrey. Beautiful! : )
Brewer Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 10:44 PM
Thank you, Connie.
Haight Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 6:12 PM
So much said in so few words, Geoffrey. Congratulations on your Trophy win! Sandra
Brewer Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 10:42 PM
Thank you, Sandra.
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Powerful. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal, Geoffrey.
Brewer Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 10:41 PM
Many thanks, Line
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 5:53 PM
Back with congratulations Geoffrey! :) xomo
Brewer Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 10:37 PM
Thanks again, Maureen.
Roper Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 6:30 PM
Back again, Geoffrey. Congratulations on your 1 liner poem . Hugs Eve ~`*
Daniel Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Great line, Geoffrey, congratulations on POTD:)
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 6:31 PM
such a sad one, if I am interpreting it correctly. Congrats in the contest, Geoffrey. oh, and for POTD too!!
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:36 PM
nicely done, Geoffrey, congratulations on POTD!
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 11:53 AM
- Geoffrey, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - // Anne-Lise :)
Downing  Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful potd, Geoffrey... hugs and smiles :)
Smith Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Eloquent Geoffery, Congratulations for POTD honors and in the contest...
Lawless Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Excellent Geoffrey - historical wordplay with a twist. Congrats on your placement in the contest
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations on your placement and so nice to see this ho bored for POTD! : )
Williams Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 5:02 AM
Congratulations on POTD Geoffrey. A clever Monoku on the cliche. Congratulations on your placement too...Maria
One Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 4:28 AM
Congrats on POTD..
Vaso Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 5:44 PM
Great Monoku, love the history.
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:47 PM
- Congratulations Geoffrey, on your great second place in the contest - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Powerful. Congrats on your winner of a poem, Geoffrey.
George   Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Brilliantly powerful! Sincerely, Elaine
One Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Fields of normandy... great one liner Geoffrey.. Congratulations on your placement in the cliche monoku contest..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 11:12 AM
Stunning pen. Wonderful. My best to you!
Brewer Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 1:45 PM
Thank you for the encouragement, Maureen.
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