June

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This is a Collom Lune Haiku poem. ~

june mountain valley
summer sleepers dream at peace
moonlit lattice gazebo

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/14/2023 8:43:00 AM

June is a wonderful month/this is a wonderful Haiku write. June will be back next year. Have a wonderful day writing away............................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2023 7:37:00 AM

When I see “June” I see my mom. That was her name. Love june mountain valley and the peace it brings…

Regina Elliott
Date: 11/7/2023 3:41:00 PM

Hi Kim, June is such a beautiful name. One syllable name that conjures up special women, like your Mom, summer, etc. Many blessings to you & yours. ~

Bill Baker

Date: 11/7/2023 7:14:00 AM

Sounds like a great place to sleep outside in the summer in the gazebo. I like your Haiku, Regina. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Regina Elliott
Date: 11/7/2023 3:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, Bill. Gazebos in the summer are such a lovely place to sit. Sleeping in one sounds great too, with the moon and the chorus of crickets. Many of life's blessings to you. ~