Junco

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High Fives for June contest

Sponsor Andrea Deitrich

Date 6/8/25

Junco	

Just another bird you say
Juxtaposed to other birds unfair
Jettison your prejudices
Join with other ornithologists
Judging the Junco on its own merits
Jubilantly this little bird thrives
Joyfulness in its tiny song

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 6/15/2025 1:34:00 PM

I hope you enjoy playing with words as much as I do because such a joy makes poems like this fun. Have to hunt 'j's' in this contest. I'd think all poets like time with words, understatement, but don't know that all like the requirements of a picky form. This is very nice, I definitely ENJOYED my time with these words. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/15/2025 2:02:00 PM

I do CayCay. It is fun. Thanks for your kind comments

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/9/2025 6:49:00 AM

If he was the solo bird in your life, those tiny songs would be the loudest ;) Cute

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/15/2025 2:01:00 PM

Thank you Kim