Jumpstart - Collaboration With Poet Destroyer

How did it come to this?
You and me down memory bliss…

Somewhere in between losing myself …
I misplaced the dust remover off my shelf…

Now I’ll march on, like a cheerful parade…
Smiling my big pearly whites, as you begin to fade...

I disguised the use, when you called me a broken down car…
Adjusting all the plugs under my hood, I reached in too far...

I touched and fondled every mound and tendency inside of me…
All my heart needed, was a brand new battery…

I found my own cure, reviving my broken heart disease…
Blocking the sunburn from jumping, on my heart, like a trapeze…

I got rocks stored in my pocket, that came with a guarantee…  
Sustaining weight on my weakened knees, reassuring me warranty…

That I will get through this, without you to drive…
I have a map of the world, traced on my thighs…

You may have held the moon, but not anymore…
There are millions of galaxies for me to explore … 

Once I face the dark and horrible truth…
That I didn’t like who I was, with you… 

That’s why I shouldn’t be starving, for your attention…
When all you gave me, were paltry inventions…

Instead I’ll wave bye, at my shriveled heart’s cost…
And immediately stop sniffing, our love’s exhaust…

In time you’ll be nothing but a tumbleweed …
A random thought I won’t even keep…

When I’m fully restored, you’ll be left in the dust…
And I’ll be stronger than I ever was
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Jones Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 6:49 AM
Wow Susan...what a powerful poem...been sick...sorry the congrats so long in coming....best advise I've heard for a broken heart. Congrats. Donna
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March 31, 2013 at 11:21 AM
CONGRATS. GREAT LINES. Goodness xxx
Squyres Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 11:06 AM
Wonderful collab!! Congratulations to both of you on this win !!
May Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 9:00 AM
congrats to both of you on this great win
Taylor Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Congrats, Susan. Well done. Happy Easter. Hugs, Ralph
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 8:11 AM
Susan, this was very nice to see this morning. Your win in the broken heart contest. MUch deserved. Both of you emoted well! Happy Easter to you, my friend and I hope today finds you less stressed. Luv, Andrea
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March 30, 2013 at 11:03 PM
Susan, congratulations with your super super awesome win...wink... love this one, once again... always~ Linda
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Congratulations on your co-write win in P.D.'s "Collaborate With Me" contest Susan. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D.,Susan
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September 17, 2011 at 8:21 AM
Another wonderful collab thats is so nicely written... congrats always Michael
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September 17, 2011 at 3:29 AM
Congratulations on your accomplished place in the contest "collaborate with me"...CR
Kendrick Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 8:23 PM
I especially like the last two lines...Enjoyed reading this winning work..Sara
Horne Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Susan : )
Sweetheart Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Congrats Susan on a superb win with this collab with PD .. stupendous words ..enjoy luv..
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September 16, 2011 at 1:31 AM
Susan, Congratulations on your tag team... love the ending so much... gives a good jump start to every life... thank you for the joy of working with me....p.d.
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August 7, 2011 at 12:11 AM
yes,, Susan~ here i am checking on my poems,, and mail.. thought i would stop by and say hi! you take care,..p.d.
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August 5, 2011 at 1:11 PM
Interesting use of metaphor, which is kept on track right to the end. A good collaboration here. I'm not entering any contests at the moment, but I was sorely tempted to try this one...I'm not though. But I wish you luck in this contest. Love, Robert.
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