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. Ahoy the Horizon White trails behind . engine roaring splashes applauding . eyes watch foam never the helm . queries gather effects on loan . cause forgotten echoed in foam . ripples arc out arrowhead widening . time for fun don the water skis . dragged behind a trailing spear . leap side wake surge way outside . building speed rope stretched taut . flying back in knees crouching . up and over flying with ease . JUMPING THE WAKE . bumpy landing arms hit waves . balance back swinging round . ripples fade surface clears . past now awake steals the moment . splashes settle meaning re-surfaces . reactions loosen perception deepens . cause returns etched on heading . helm grabbed tight wake behind . nothing to prove nothing to chase . calmness installed ripples quelled . All ahead full The Wake's in flight
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