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jumping in puddles

A spring rain falling watching him jump in puddles bright yellow slicker
2/2/14

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Date: 2/7/2014 4:36:00 AM
Spring rains bring back so many great childhood memories which you have expressed to perfection here Barbara...How have you been my friend? - Tim
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Date: 2/7/2014 3:34:00 AM
beautifully written Barbara what fun love it hugs
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Date: 2/7/2014 2:53:00 AM
Childhood in three short lines! A wonderful haiku Barbara!
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Date: 2/6/2014 8:55:00 AM
lol, love this jolly write, Barbara
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/6/2014 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Jack...how are things with you? Finally some rain here in California..
Date: 2/3/2014 7:15:00 PM
cherish these memories.
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Date: 2/2/2014 12:00:00 PM
a lovely haiku BG...very nice imagery...
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