Jump Start My Heart

Jump Start My Heart
The pulse is barely detectable growing weaker every second Oxygen, breath of life so thin the moment he went through the glass Emergency, emergency, code red means critical care needed Emergency, emergency more time the monitors have pleaded Through double hissed air lock doors the gurney comes to rest Only if time gave a little bit more to save these eyes from death Emergency, emergency critical DOA arrival for the morgue to receive Emergency, emergency donor card active what organs can we retrieve Systematic checks and tests to match up with lists of lives who bleed Cross referenced and graphed a positive match for a heart in need Emergency, emergency redirect the gurney into operation room 9 Emergency, emergency start to finish we only have a few hours time The DOA lays bared, incisions everywhere, the largest in mid chest The helicopter awaits, a panic state, flying a cooler way out west Emergency, emergency clinging to life left with little chance Emergency, emergency the EKG is flat as death gets a transplant Life anew stitched in, arteries in stints, preparing to revive a heart All plugged in, wired skin, electrical pulses give life a jump start Emergency, emergency failed revival on the first three tries Emergency, emergency on the fourth life beats to opening eyes
Written for contest: "Wake Up My Heart" 11/04/17
WON 1ST PLACE IN CONTEST RESULTS
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Ashley Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 7:34 PM
A deep and stirring poem Brian, full of intense imagery. A thrilling and suspenseful write. Congratulations on your fine placement. ~Susan
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:53 PM
Congratulations, Brian, excellent imagery . Hugs Eve ~`*
Davey Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Thank you so much Eve
Scars Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:37 AM
deep and poignant, great poem from a great original contest, thank you and congrats :)
Davey Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Thank you Laura it's always a pleasure
Daniel Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Wow, Brian, that was a brilliant piece, congratulations on your top win:)
Davey Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 4:52 PM
Thank you so mUch Jo I am glad everyone seemed to like my take on the theme
Haight Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Wow, Brian, what an amazing poem that met the theme challenge over and above! You presented a miracle! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win in the contest. Sandra
Davey Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 7:33 PM
Well that comment sure made me smile! I am always happy to receive positive words from you Sandra! Thank you
Pett Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Brian, great piece enjoyed. :))
Davey Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 7:32 PM
Thank you sonce much
Smith Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 2:24 PM
An action packed read Brian, congrats :)
Davey Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Johnson Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on this unique approach.
Davey Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 2:08 PM
Thank you and I am just glad that it worked out
Kimathi Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 7:11 AM
Congrats Brian, for your placement with this brilliantly-penned piece! ;-)
Davey Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Thanks Teddy I appreciate it
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 8:04 PM
Wow! Action-packed! Congratulations, Brian!
Davey Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 3:45 AM
Thank you Kim I appreciate your comments
One Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 6:41 AM
you really know how to write a deep poem.. Well written my friend..
Davey Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 3:27 PM
Thank you I was hoping that this write is completely different than what anyone else who entered the contest might have written
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