Brian Davey Poet Footle

Jump Ship

Deep freeze
       Help please

             Man down
               Sea drown

                   Ice float
                    Wreck boat

                        Sink fast
                          Top mast

                             Life vest
                               Chance best

                                  Search team
                                    Bad dream

                                       Storm front
                                         Harms hunt

                                            Cold air
                                              Look there

                                                 Save who
                                                   Those two

                                                      Frost bite
                                                        All night

                                                          Wind roars
                                                            Rain pours

                                                              May day
                                                                Hope pray

                                                                   Ships chance
                                                                     Last dance

                                                                        Some died
                                                                          Most cried




                                                                   bmdavey@10/31/17

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Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2017 at 5:36 PM oh it puts me in mind of a movie from last year where the oil rig went down and they were desperately trying to get the men off. Or Titanic!! I enjoyed this. Brian Davey November 1, 2017 at 6:48 PM Thank you, this is what I originally wrote for the Footle contest them realized that it specified just one Footle one.

Damien Knight October 31, 2017 at 3:28 PM Wow this is a very well written footle where everything flows together in a tragic story! I shoild say it will be a winner Brian Davey October 31, 2017 at 3:58 PM Thanks again for your nice words however I had to pull this write from the contest because it stated only one Footle Only, so I wrote a new one for the contest called Black Friday