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An enclosed rhyme sonnet :)

Jump up high, jump, don't come down Fear nothing, smile, twirl and turn Jump higher still, feel the sun burn Don't come down, don't drown, don't drown Lift your head, your eyes, see inside See colours, fractals, see melody Dance to music, hear deep, set free Don't come down, don't drown, don't hide Let it spread your growing unknown wings Fly tornado, torrent, split the sky Trample rainbows, close your eyes Don't come down, don't hide, just zing Just zing and zest, be wonderful and wild Dance who you are, man, woman, child *** February 14, 2017

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Date: 2/16/2017 5:44:00 PM
I love this, Darren... great advice and enclosed rhyme is my favorite rhyme scheme! I hope you're feeling better and getting stronger each day. Hugs, Rhonda
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Darren White
Date: 2/16/2017 11:17:00 PM
Rhonda, thank you! I am packing my bags because I can go home in a few hours :)
Date: 2/14/2017 11:17:00 PM
You must really be having fun, tornadoes were touching down my side of town . My son had a tree break in the backyard but luck it fell horizontal so it didn't fall on his house :-)
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Darren White
Date: 2/14/2017 11:21:00 PM
Ouch Eve, good that nothing bad happened. I'll ve more careful while dancing from now on :)
Date: 2/14/2017 10:29:00 PM
Keep on dancing my friend...hope your doing OK...great verse...god bless...^WW^
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Darren White
Date: 2/14/2017 11:19:00 PM
Thank you WW, it's slowly going better :)
Date: 2/14/2017 5:08:00 PM
JUST ZING. Cool song, Darren. Did you ever hear the disco song Jump. That is what made me want to see this one!!
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Darren White
Date: 2/14/2017 11:20:00 PM
No, don't know that song Andrea, will look it up :)
Date: 2/14/2017 1:31:00 PM
Beautiful...let's dance
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Darren White
Date: 2/14/2017 1:34:00 PM
Join me, Tim, our quick dance moves will make all readers jealous ;)
Date: 2/14/2017 6:02:00 AM
It's quite early in the morning here but you have me looking for my dancing shoes. This is a nice wake up poem Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 2/14/2017 6:04:00 AM
Morning Chris, finish your coffee and dance with me ;)

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