Darren White Poet Enclosed Rhyme

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An enclosed rhyme sonnet :)

Jump

Jump up high, jump, don't come down
Fear nothing, smile, twirl and turn
Jump higher still, feel the sun burn
Don't come down, don't drown, don't drown

Lift your head, your eyes, see inside
See colours, fractals, see melody
Dance to music, hear deep, set free
Don't come down, don't drown, don't hide

Let it spread your growing unknown wings
Fly tornado, torrent, split the sky
Trample rainbows, close your eyes
Don't come down, don't hide, just zing

    Just zing and zest, be wonderful and wild
    Dance who you are, man, woman, child

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February 14, 2017

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 16, 2017 at 5:44 PM I love this, Darren... great advice and enclosed rhyme is my favorite rhyme scheme! I hope you're feeling better and getting stronger each day. Hugs, Rhonda Darren White February 16, 2017 at 11:17 PM Rhonda, thank you! I am packing my bags because I can go home in a few hours :)

Eve Roper February 14, 2017 at 11:17 PM You must really be having fun, tornadoes were touching down my side of town . My son had a tree break in the backyard but luck it fell horizontal so it didn't fall on his house :-) Darren White February 14, 2017 at 11:21 PM Ouch Eve, good that nothing bad happened. I'll ve more careful while dancing from now on :)

Winged Warrior February 14, 2017 at 10:29 PM Keep on dancing my friend...hope your doing OK...great verse...god bless...^WW^ Darren White February 14, 2017 at 11:19 PM Thank you WW, it's slowly going better :)

Andrea Dietrich February 14, 2017 at 5:08 PM JUST ZING. Cool song, Darren. Did you ever hear the disco song Jump. That is what made me want to see this one!! Darren White February 14, 2017 at 11:20 PM No, don't know that song Andrea, will look it up :)

Tim Smith February 14, 2017 at 1:31 PM Beautiful...let's dance Darren White February 14, 2017 at 1:34 PM Join me, Tim, our quick dance moves will make all readers jealous ;)

Chris Green February 14, 2017 at 6:02 AM It's quite early in the morning here but you have me looking for my dancing shoes. This is a nice wake up poem Darren. Darren White February 14, 2017 at 6:04 AM Morning Chris, finish your coffee and dance with me ;)