Jump

Deep breath
Jump
Land on something soft
Let love break the fall
Dive deep into it all
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Gregory Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 4:43 PM
The obscurity serve as a new translation on each read. For me a leap of faith isn't without its reward. Nicely done.
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 3:31 AM
Enjoyed reading your post. Sara K
Campanella Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 12:06 PM
Hello, again - You did this in 17 words - I did mine in 16 - a word challenge - I like -"Dive deep into it all" cute poem - Good Luck & stay safe too! Perry C.
Johnson Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Thanks again :)
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