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Deep breath Jump Land on something soft Let love break the fall Dive deep into it all

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Date: 8/1/2024 4:43:00 PM
The obscurity serve as a new translation on each read. For me a leap of faith isn't without its reward. Nicely done.
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Date: 12/16/2023 3:31:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your post. Sara K
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Date: 8/23/2023 12:06:00 PM
Hello, again - You did this in 17 words - I did mine in 16 - a word challenge - I like -"Dive deep into it all" cute poem - Good Luck & stay safe too! Perry C.
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Charity Johnson
Date: 8/23/2023 8:21:00 PM
Thanks again :)

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