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04/08/25

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Eighth Place

Contest by Brian Strand

series of scattered suffused sufferings sprouting from shocks -stress - strain appearing off and on in agitated brain sometimes igniting anger sometimes to lament or repent leading to diffused despondency~ reflexing complexity of perplexed mind while all disarranged disorganised rather jumbled up creating junk- how to assemble- totally bewildered confused on juxtaposition in jugglery when meaningless thoughts in hazard haphazard manner get crumpled entangled coiled turning surreal fumbling voice of unimplemented wishes- pointless feelings suffocating ~ unfulfilled ambitions grumbling in vain coming in dreams in streams drifting on garage clearance through nasty nightmare- may be freudian expression of subconscious mind encompassed by smothered sensual feelings~ failure - success - love - betrayal - happiness - miseries are jumbled swinging in juxtaposition~

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