Jumbled

why do you haunt my head leaving my thoughts jumbled like tumbling blocks

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2013 12:19:00 AM

Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

Stephan McBride

Date: 1/22/2011 4:13:00 PM

welcome to poetry soup, very well put together

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/18/2011 5:02:00 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Karen. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2011 5:09:00 PM

love the metaphor, enjoyed your write Karen,..p.d.