July Day

July day


A heaviness entraps with the folding of the clouds
Paleness, thunderous, symmetrical and curved lines.
Stare into the stillness escaping the shroud
Look for the glimmer it is there bending entwined

Monitor the evolving motions changing
The nimiety of gas rolling, engrossing even captivating
Slices of flash and echoes erupt
Merged hues austere yet enticing almost bewitching

Panic intense…

Then - gallons rolling, descending, pounding arriving
Landing on the solid and rebounding in rhythm
Grassy aroma, dust fluctuates on earthy mounds lifting
Concave pools forming gushing and flowing

Hush proceeds - the effervescent fizz now draining
Escaping their landing by gulps into the crevices
Drips into the nooks, sills, rails and leaves
No trace just reflective is remaining.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/27/2009 5:15:00 PM
Super write Paula>>James
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Date: 7/26/2009 9:03:00 PM
very original! Paula! nice! jim
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Date: 7/26/2009 5:31:00 PM
nice! gotta love a down pour! light & Love
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Date: 7/25/2009 8:53:00 AM
Very descriptive of a summer rain storm or a storm in our lives. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/25/2009 8:28:00 AM
We had one of these "little showers" yesterday. Quite exciting - if you're inside the house ... Welcome to the Soup, Paula! Sit a spell, and pull up a keyboard!
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Date: 7/24/2009 11:56:00 PM
Good use of imagery for a thought provoking poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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