Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

July Celebration

I am here to tell a story,                                                                            it will be in all it's glory.                                                                       About a military boy,                                                                                he gave his girl much joy.

 

They both lived far away,                                                                        she always wanted him to stay.                                                            Marry me he said,                                                                                  she turned a shade of red.

 

A pretty wedding was planned,                                                               with food and a big band.                                                                          It was a July 4th Celebration,                                                          fireworks for them and for the nation.

  

Date Written: 7/4/2022

3 Place

Note: True Story~~July 4th is our Anniversary.
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Len Gasun August 15, 2022 at 2:00 AM Congratulations on your win my dear friend Paula! Such a beautiful and romantic story. I love it. Thanks of sharing. God bless you and your writings. Hugs Paula Goldsmith August 15, 2022 at 10:44 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have this July Celebration win. Glad you love my true story/write. It was a very hard time for us. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............

Mystic Rose Rose August 13, 2022 at 2:28 AM What an amazing story you told us, Congratulations on your winning poetry Paul, this is so romantic and inspiring, thank you for dropping by. Much love, :) Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2022 at 9:37 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have this July Celebration win. Glad you enjoyed my true story/write. In many ways, it was a very hard time. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............

Sotto Poet August 12, 2022 at 1:54 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved win, dear, Paula. You penned such a sensational and delightful poem. Best regards Paula Goldsmith August 12, 2022 at 5:41 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have this July Celebration win. Glad you enjoyed my story/write. Have a great/fun/blessed weekend.............

Sam Kauffman August 11, 2022 at 9:59 AM Paula, this is such a sweet, and romantic, story - your story. This poem is filled with sheer delight and lovely romance! Congrats and high fives! Belated a belated Happy Anniversary. Paula Goldsmith August 12, 2022 at 5:39 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have this win for our anniversary. Glad you enjoyed our story and my write. Have a great/fun/blessed weekend.............

Tania Kitchin August 11, 2022 at 6:49 AM Paula, congratulations on your winning placement, a sweet story, loved the last line! Paula Goldsmith August 12, 2022 at 5:37 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have this win for our anniversary. Glad you like this story/write. Have a great/fun/blessed weekend.............

Delice Arleen Skelly July 19, 2022 at 2:52 AM Nicely done, belated anniversary wishes...Delice Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2022 at 2:40 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your belated anniversary wishes. Glad you like this one. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............

Caren Krutsinger July 15, 2022 at 3:59 AM Happy 4th of July anniversary my friend! Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 10:52 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your anniversary wish. Glad you like this True Write. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............

Andrea Dietrich July 10, 2022 at 12:39 PM So was this anyone you know or pure fiction? It's a cute story mixing in Independence Day with a woman losing her freedom. hahaha. (just being silly) Paula Goldsmith July 11, 2022 at 9:05 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like this True Write. We did not pick the day (4th) the day picked us. He was in the military and he could get a long weekend off. We said, we would always have the day off from work and could never forget our anniversary. Both so true. The big Dec wedding had to be canceled. It turned out to be very small and No Band. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............

Anil Deo July 9, 2022 at 12:26 AM Amen, Paula. When choosing wedding dates, how great to celebrate with national hudays, landmarks, & recalling our worthy human "ancestors" everywhere ( but worship Jesus/God only, not ancestors, however great) shalom Paula Goldsmith July 9, 2022 at 8:43 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like this true write. We did not pick the day (4th) the day picked us. He was in the military and he could get a long weekend off. We said, we would always have the day off from work and could never forget our anniversary. Both so true. God comes first. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............

Gershon Wolf July 4, 2022 at 6:53 PM Sweet, Paula, and pure as the driven snow! Happy anniversary! Paula Goldsmith July 5, 2022 at 11:34 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your Happy Anniversary wish. Glad you like this write. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 4, 2022 at 2:08 PM It is so nice that this day is special to you in more ways than one, Paula. Happy anniversary. Your poem is lovely. :) Paula Goldsmith July 5, 2022 at 11:33 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your Happy Anniversary wish. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............

Jenna Logan July 4, 2022 at 11:57 AM HAPPY ANNIVERSARY, Paula. Paula Goldsmith July 4, 2022 at 12:03 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your HAPPY ANNIVERSARY. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............