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July Celebration

I am here to tell a story,
it will be in all it's glory.
About a military boy,
he gave his girl much joy.
They both lived far away,
she always wanted him to stay.
Marry me he said,
she turned a shade of red.
A pretty wedding was planned,
with food and a big band.
It was a July 4th Celebration,
fireworks for them and for the nation.
Date Written: 7/4/2022
3 Place
Note: True Story~~July 4th is our Anniversary.
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Date: 8/15/2022 2:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend Paula! Such a beautiful and romantic story. I love it. Thanks of sharing. God bless you and your writings. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2022 10:44:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have this July Celebration win. Glad you love my true story/write. It was a very hard time for us. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............
Date: 8/13/2022 2:28:00 AM
What an amazing story you told us, Congratulations on your winning poetry Paul, this is so romantic and inspiring, thank you for dropping by. Much love, :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2022 9:37:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have this July Celebration win. Glad you enjoyed my true story/write. In many ways, it was a very hard time. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............
Date: 8/12/2022 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, dear, Paula. You penned such a sensational and delightful poem. Best regards
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2022 5:41:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have this July Celebration win. Glad you enjoyed my story/write. Have a great/fun/blessed weekend.............
Date: 8/11/2022 9:59:00 AM
Paula, this is such a sweet, and romantic, story - your story. This poem is filled with sheer delight and lovely romance! Congrats and high fives! Belated a belated Happy Anniversary.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2022 5:39:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have this win for our anniversary. Glad you enjoyed our story and my write. Have a great/fun/blessed weekend.............
Date: 8/11/2022 6:49:00 AM
Paula, congratulations on your winning placement, a sweet story, loved the last line!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2022 5:37:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have this win for our anniversary. Glad you like this story/write. Have a great/fun/blessed weekend.............
Date: 7/19/2022 2:52:00 AM
Nicely done, belated anniversary wishes...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:40:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your belated anniversary wishes. Glad you like this one. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............
Date: 7/15/2022 3:59:00 AM
Happy 4th of July anniversary my friend! Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 10:52:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your anniversary wish. Glad you like this True Write. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............
Date: 7/10/2022 12:39:00 PM
So was this anyone you know or pure fiction? It's a cute story mixing in Independence Day with a woman losing her freedom. hahaha. (just being silly)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/11/2022 9:05:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like this True Write. We did not pick the day (4th) the day picked us. He was in the military and he could get a long weekend off. We said, we would always have the day off from work and could never forget our anniversary. Both so true. The big Dec wedding had to be canceled. It turned out to be very small and No Band. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............
Date: 7/9/2022 12:26:00 AM
Amen, Paula. When choosing wedding dates, how great to celebrate with national hudays, landmarks, & recalling our worthy human "ancestors" everywhere ( but worship Jesus/God only, not ancestors, however great) shalom
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/9/2022 8:43:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like this true write. We did not pick the day (4th) the day picked us. He was in the military and he could get a long weekend off. We said, we would always have the day off from work and could never forget our anniversary. Both so true. God comes first. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............
Date: 7/4/2022 6:53:00 PM
Sweet, Paula, and pure as the driven snow! Happy anniversary!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2022 11:34:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your Happy Anniversary wish. Glad you like this write. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............
Date: 7/4/2022 2:08:00 PM
It is so nice that this day is special to you in more ways than one, Paula. Happy anniversary. Your poem is lovely. :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2022 11:33:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your Happy Anniversary wish. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............
Date: 7/4/2022 11:57:00 AM
HAPPY ANNIVERSARY, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2022 12:03:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your HAPPY ANNIVERSARY. Have a great/fun/blessed day.............