Juliet's Plea

~“Tis torture, and not mercy. Heaven is here
Where Juliet lives, and every cat and dog
And little mouse, every unworthy thing,
Live here in heaven and may look on her,
But Romeo may not."
- William Shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet, 3.3

Juliet's Plea

Dost thou deem, heav'n only rises with the corpse
upon the last sweet breathe of virgin light
as face dost pale to pearl and roses leave my lips tonight
Romeo, my living eyes knew naught your purpose.

In sooth, I thought thee dead on that black night
and so, no other earthly joy could stay my heart
but heav'ns had we all, before this sorry plight
pray pardon love, I would nay have thee depart.

Abide, abide my love, my Romeo, alas...
by your leave, I hold St. Peter’s gate op’ for thee
And verily, I wait for time is naught in death 
and thee, my love, my Lord, are all to me. 

*Their love and their deaths were a scandel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Edwards Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 6:00 AM
Simply amazing... xx
Benson Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 12:35 AM
This is wonderful, Debbie, God bless you.
Johnson Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 9:03 PM
old english prevails not withstanding wroth, or sumthin...caint do it your 3 types of verse. well done babe, (entered) xo, Don
Warden Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Fantastic writing.
Nair Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 2:56 PM
Another exciting entry from your pen.thanx for the comment,luv
Peranteau Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 8:39 AM
William lives on ! A wonderful read Debbie. From time to time, it is so exciting to muse over the work of such national treasures as Shakespeare ! Such a talented soul dear poet, as yourself my friend ! TY for inspiring my Sunday with this write ! Have a wonderful day....much love, james
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 1:42 AM
Marvelous!
George   Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:54 PM
Ah!!!! 'Tis Shakespeare himself. Awesome, Deb. Lainie
Villanueva Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 5:39 AM
surely be a winner debbie...really awesome write is presented here in the prose poetry...*_*junjun
George   Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 3:42 AM
Awesome! Deb. simply awesome. Number one!!! Lainie
Williams Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 1:12 AM
nicely done, good luck in the contest, David
Maverick Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 11:42 PM
Soooup maill..!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 7:04 PM
right on target Debbie with the theme..premise..vernacular vocab... time period.. a treasure luv..good luck in the contest.. thankxx for your sweet review ...appreciated..so..
Sumler Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 6:23 PM
A very interesting take and creative write Deb! Good luck with Juliet's emotional heart-felt plea in the contest!
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