Juliet

Beyond green meadows humming birds slow flight
To gaze on beauty as she passes by
And jealous stars dim with a whispered sigh
When Juliet comes and her brightness lights
I am lonely when your gone Juliet
You came to love me when my need was king
And took my spirit from Winter to Spring
Filling my eyes like a fiery sunset

Oh, Juliet with eyes of a darker hue
Do you not see sun's setting red blush?
As you take my chalice filled with its pain
To let spill out, refill with love that's new
Curse its past with lover's passionate rush
Telling my heart why nature created you

For the Contest Juliet
Sponsored by Isaiah Zerbst
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 26, 2014 at 9:57 PM
Fredric ,. Congratulations:) goodnight ~SKAT~
Parker Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 9:41 AM
Thank you Skat for your kindness and friendship, you appear to have a kind soul, may it always be so...Frederic
Hamilton Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 5:27 PM
lovely sonnet Fred congrats on win hugs
Parker Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 9:09 PM
thank you shadow for the kindness
Mehta Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Enjoyed the write on Juliet and congrats on the win, frederic
Parker Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 9:08 PM
Thank you Dr Ram for the kindness
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February 17, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Both parts of the poem start off with a description and then move into feeling. I have to say that I am more partial to the descriptive parts since they are so good. Awesome mind pictures!
Parker Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 6:16 PM
thank you for your kindness
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