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Juliet

Beyond green meadows humming birds slow flight To gaze on beauty as she passes by And jealous stars dim with a whispered sigh When Juliet comes and her brightness lights I am lonely when your gone Juliet You came to love me when my need was king And took my spirit from Winter to Spring Filling my eyes like a fiery sunset Oh, Juliet with eyes of a darker hue Do you not see sun's setting red blush? As you take my chalice filled with its pain To let spill out, refill with love that's new Curse its past with lover's passionate rush Telling my heart why nature created you For the Contest Juliet Sponsored by Isaiah Zerbst

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/26/2014 9:57:00 PM
Fredric ,. Congratulations:) goodnight ~SKAT~
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/27/2014 9:41:00 AM
Thank you Skat for your kindness and friendship, you appear to have a kind soul, may it always be so...Frederic
Date: 2/18/2014 5:27:00 PM
lovely sonnet Fred congrats on win hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/18/2014 9:09:00 PM
thank you shadow for the kindness
Date: 2/18/2014 6:01:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on Juliet and congrats on the win, frederic
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/18/2014 9:08:00 PM
Thank you Dr Ram for the kindness
Date: 2/17/2014 6:10:00 PM
Both parts of the poem start off with a description and then move into feeling. I have to say that I am more partial to the descriptive parts since they are so good. Awesome mind pictures!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/17/2014 6:16:00 PM
thank you for your kindness

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