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Juju

Some call me Majnun
Unpredictable Monsoon
When Eye Step In, Eye read the room
You don't know me, so don't assume
Enlightened Eye rise, Illuminated Eye bloom.

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Susan Ashley

July 2, 2024 at 5:58 PM

Dear Carlene, your exceptional use of language and clever wordplay captivates my imagination. I adore your use of "Eye" in place of "I", it gives the feeling of a higher sense of perception. Your poetic pen is potent, "enlightened" and "illuminated" and fills the page with thought-provoking verse. Love every facet in this gem! Rich and deep. Warmest wishes my poetry friend.. ~Susan

Randy Freie

May 20, 2024 at 3:22 AM

Hi Juju, if eye knew what you could do, eye would have glimpsed the rhyme in you and take the time it takes to view. Write on baby sister!

Carlene Juju The Dragon

May 21, 2024 at 1:07 PM

Thank You Kindly, Sir Randy!

Beata Agustin

January 29, 2024 at 7:20 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Juju

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