Jujitsu Dojo

We strike out on objective clash
Were set to meet, make it brash
She throws an elbow, i duck the might
Tackle waist first
Still delite in sight
Wrap an arm, advance position 
Shes still a girl 
With the greatest ambition
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 15, 2012 at 1:01 PM
So is this an exhibition fight or are you wanting to ask her out on a date after you let her look warrior-like? This is fun and flirtatious!...I am not an experienced writer...wondering,...do you leave off apostrophes on purpose? I've seen other poets do this...others like myself don't know any difference...Gwendolen
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May 15, 2012 at 1:09 PM
haha maybe its a combination of both experiences at once..about the grammar, sometimes you disregard it maybe thats what makes poetry so uninhibited. Although to make money writing you have to do more technical papers and follow the book of "standards". thanks for checking this one!
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