Juicy Orange

flesh of orange pulp
bursting on juicy glasses---
to quench summer's heat


1 Senryu Except Love Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 8:36 AM
so refreshing and tangy in its mood and feel, ashley.. enjoyed how you ended this.. superb!.. thanks for coming by my page.. huggs
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