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Judgmental Eye

Egocentric, engaged in games of one-upmanship I developed a jaundiced and judgmental eye Over time, losing over mind-body my grip Belied expectations oft made heart sigh My reflex response was to put others down Mocking both the living and dead, saw love die Lines on face hardened, sarcasm bore a frown Demonic dreams deepened my dark despair In images thus conjured, I began to drown It was a Joro spider that made me aware When a small sunbird was caught in its net Defying base instinct, it released her with care I took this as a message to change my mindset Enabled simply by melding head with heart Taking no more, mere rebuffs as a threat I now mock myself; it is a learnt art Choosing slow consciousness correction Simply mindfully and gently, adding love to cart Soul centric introspection cajoles us to shift direction Igniting bliss within, paving way for soul’s resurrection

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Date: 9/29/2023 11:40:00 AM
I wish those who cant control their ego and like to play victim would read your poems.. Thank you for writing for my poem and congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 9/29/2023 5:13:00 PM
Thanks for hosting, Silent One and for the placement.
Date: 9/20/2023 7:06:00 AM
A very interesting and deep poem my friend. We can weave patterns in our minds that lead us to be better beings. A fav.. God bless you my friend...
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Date: 9/20/2023 7:35:00 AM
Thank you, dear Robert! :)
Date: 9/19/2023 11:26:00 PM
Interesting words and certainly more compelling than fighting and chaos. I get very unnerved being around unpleasantness - perhaps a further shift along will ignite bliss rather than worry...
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Date: 9/20/2023 1:14:00 AM
Good advice! :)
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Date: 9/20/2023 1:02:00 AM
Recognising each acts as of their present consciousness coordinate, we accept them as they are and amble along our own way, joyfully.

Book: Shattered Sighs