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Judgement

Our actions weighed, Our thoughts scaled, Our steps mirrored, Our excesses are censored. The hidden is uncovered, The past is discovered, There’s no flight, We're encircled by light. We're read like a book, Caught like a fish by a hook, Our pathway is beamed, We’re telescoped as deemed. The Judge sits, Unparalleled days are His wits, He reveals the deepest parts, His words hit like darts. There’s an inner voice that speaks to us, Mirror us before ourselves, Often we don’t give a fuss, Even though our deeds are archived on shelves March 7, 2023. Writing Challenge - "J" Words - Poetry Contest, Constance La France.

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:07:00 PM
Thompson, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 4/6/2023 8:39:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. I'm honoured.
Date: 3/9/2023 10:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Thompson ... great written :) -
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Date: 3/9/2023 8:19:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. I'm honoured.
Date: 3/7/2023 5:46:00 AM
Words you don't want to hear, "Depart from me thou wicked and slothful servant" Good write, scary topic, Thompson.
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Date: 3/7/2023 10:19:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel, for stopping by.

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