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Judge Mental People throwing rocks at crippled dogs torturing non-classroom frogs wallowing in self made bogs pure jealously – non-feral hogs consuming nothing but the same the daily slop, a little grain the grayish mud a match for brain an open gate too much a strain peering from their darkened sty envying the darting fly suspicious of the black crows cry entrenched in deep snouted lie believing that their bloated shrieks elevate such brutish freaks to tops of clear sky bluish peaks to trash the goals that others seek warriors without a soul fighting from deep in a hole guarding the emptiness they stole mocking the songs of bridgeless troll ©11/8/2017 submitted to – Judgmental People And Haters – Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/12/2017 8:14:00 PM
Excellent, John, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 12/12/2017 1:10:00 PM
Back with Congrats! :) xomo
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Date: 12/12/2017 12:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win, John with a beautiful poem with an attractive title.
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Date: 12/11/2017 3:58:00 PM
Love the clever title my friend. Congratulations on your win in Brenda's contest. True, perhaps with some it is a mental problem that they seek to strike out at others for no reason at all. Tis best to forgive and move on...
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Date: 11/14/2017 10:57:00 AM
That's quite a write. Of course, I loved the fact that rhyme held the whole thing together. The analogy is strong. Surely those who wallow in mud can't expect to have clean names or reputations. To be honest...the TITLE was just a work of art. Got me with that one. :)
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Date: 11/8/2017 11:24:00 PM
A stirring pen, I could feel my jaw clenching reading it, well done! My best to you in the contest :) xomo
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Date: 11/8/2017 8:15:00 PM
Different, but great imigary :-) luck in the contest hugs Eve
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Date: 11/8/2017 6:41:00 PM
The title is absolutely sheer genius John and the poem powerfully penned:-) I hope the support from the contests makes a difference and Robert is persuaded to stay on soup:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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