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JUDAS KISSED ME SO PASSIONATELY AS IF HE, WOULD NEVER LET ANYONE HURT ME YET HE, WAS THE 1ST ONE TO HURT ME WHY HE? HE WALKED WITH ME,TALKED WITH ME,MADE LOVE TO ME SO DEEPLY HE TOOK EVERY VALUABLE PART OF ME BUT I DIDN'T MIND CAUSE I THOUGHT HE'D KEEP ME WHAT A MAN WHAT A MAN WHAT A MIGHTY GOOD MAN WHAT A PLAN WHAT A PLAN WHAT A MIGHTY GOOD PLAN STRATEGY CREATING FALSE ARGUMENTS, LIKE HE WAS MAD AT ME LIKE I WAS THE GUILTY BECAUSE HE WAS THE ACCUSER LIKE HE WAS THE VICTIM AND I,THE ABUSER HE MADE LOVE TO ME THEN KILLED ME BUT LEFT ME BREATHIN HE KILLED MY SPIRITS,AND GAVE MY LIFE NO REASON I THOUGHT HE WAS MY PRINCE CHARMING BUT HE WAS JUST A CHARMING,WITH PRINCE LOOKS I WAS SEARCHING FOR WORDS,IN A PAGELESS BOOK YET I WAS HOOKED AND ALL OF HIS EVIL WAYS I OVERLOOKED AFTER ALL, THE FIRST FEW YEARS WERE LIKE HEAVEN BUT I GUESS MASKS NEVER LASTS LIKE OUR LOVE DIDN'T LAST THE LOYAL TEST HE DIDN'T PASS HE HURT ME SO DEEP FELT LIKE I WAS LIVING IN HELL AND THAT IS THE BURNING PAIN IN MY HEART THAT STEMS FROM BETRAYEL.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/24/2014 3:09:00 PM
A star is born
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Date: 3/25/2014 5:02:00 PM
This is awesome and definitely a 7 for me! Keep up with the excellent work. You are highly welcome to Poetry soup, a community of mind blowing, soul piercing and intrigue creating poets! I hope to check back on you again. This is really, really so good
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Date: 3/16/2014 12:17:00 PM
Thought provoking poem so excellently written - I am sure many people can identify with this poem. Jan xx
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Date: 3/15/2014 1:32:00 PM
Good stuff, unfortunately too common today ---- lots of fish in the sea --- lots of wonderful people out there Sharita!
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Date: 3/10/2014 11:07:00 AM
This is good...and so full of feeling and emotion. Kissed and betrayed//do not wait//it's not too late...move on.
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Date: 3/5/2014 2:38:00 PM
I have to agree with Chris'..this is an excellent write. I really enjoyed reading it. On another note, don't let him prevent you from moving forward giving another individual a chance at your heart. Though being careful of not letting your guards down easily...regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 3/4/2014 11:30:00 PM
Great cadence. Definitely suitable for stage performance freestyle.
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Date: 3/4/2014 6:46:00 PM
WOW!! Do you sing this? Play an instrument? To read this is great, I bet to a beat. . . . .WOW, great job!!Asavvy1
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Date: 3/4/2014 1:38:00 AM
Great Song!
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Date: 3/3/2014 9:15:00 AM
Sharita, HUGE OCNGRATS on the contest win. How cool!!! Loved this poem. Betrayal is an entirely human endeavor you have described quite well!
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Date: 3/3/2014 8:14:00 AM
Thought provoking write on betrayal. Congrats on the win, sharita
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Date: 3/3/2014 7:40:00 AM
Wow! Stunning writing! Love the line "searching for words in pageless books", so powerful. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/3/2014 7:28:00 AM
Congrats on the win Sharita .A great one is this.
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