Judas

JUDAS
KISSED ME
SO PASSIONATELY
AS IF HE,
WOULD NEVER LET ANYONE HURT ME
YET HE,
WAS THE 1ST ONE TO HURT ME
WHY HE?
HE WALKED WITH ME,TALKED WITH ME,MADE LOVE TO ME SO DEEPLY
HE TOOK EVERY VALUABLE PART OF ME
BUT I DIDN'T MIND 
CAUSE I THOUGHT HE'D KEEP ME
WHAT A MAN 
WHAT A MAN 
WHAT A MIGHTY GOOD MAN
WHAT A PLAN 
WHAT A PLAN 
WHAT A MIGHTY GOOD PLAN
 STRATEGY
CREATING FALSE ARGUMENTS,
LIKE HE WAS MAD AT ME
LIKE I WAS THE GUILTY
BECAUSE HE WAS THE ACCUSER
LIKE HE WAS THE VICTIM
AND I,THE ABUSER
HE MADE LOVE TO ME
THEN KILLED ME BUT LEFT ME BREATHIN
HE KILLED MY SPIRITS,AND GAVE MY LIFE NO REASON
I THOUGHT HE WAS MY PRINCE CHARMING 
BUT HE WAS JUST A CHARMING,WITH PRINCE LOOKS
I WAS SEARCHING FOR WORDS,IN A PAGELESS BOOK
YET I WAS HOOKED
AND ALL OF HIS EVIL WAYS I OVERLOOKED
AFTER ALL,
THE FIRST FEW YEARS WERE LIKE HEAVEN
BUT I GUESS MASKS 
NEVER LASTS 
LIKE OUR LOVE DIDN'T LAST
THE LOYAL TEST HE DIDN'T PASS
HE HURT ME SO DEEP 
FELT LIKE I WAS LIVING IN HELL
AND THAT IS THE BURNING PAIN IN MY HEART THAT STEMS FROM BETRAYEL.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mccray  Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 3:09 PM
A star is born
Makama Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 5:02 PM
This is awesome and definitely a 7 for me! Keep up with the excellent work. You are highly welcome to Poetry soup, a community of mind blowing, soul piercing and intrigue creating poets! I hope to check back on you again. This is really, really so good
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 12:17 PM
Thought provoking poem so excellently written - I am sure many people can identify with this poem. Jan xx
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 1:32 PM
Good stuff, unfortunately too common today ---- lots of fish in the sea --- lots of wonderful people out there Sharita!
Callus Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 11:07 AM
This is good...and so full of feeling and emotion. Kissed and betrayed//do not wait//it's not too late...move on.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 2:38 PM
I have to agree with Chris'..this is an excellent write. I really enjoyed reading it. On another note, don't let him prevent you from moving forward giving another individual a chance at your heart. Though being careful of not letting your guards down easily...regards INK-U-SCRIPT
Britt Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 11:30 PM
Great cadence. Definitely suitable for stage performance freestyle.
Pickett Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 6:46 PM
WOW!! Do you sing this? Play an instrument? To read this is great, I bet to a beat. . . . .WOW, great job!!Asavvy1
Wegman Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 9:15 AM
Sharita, HUGE OCNGRATS on the contest win. How cool!!! Loved this poem. Betrayal is an entirely human endeavor you have described quite well!
Mehta Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:14 AM
Thought provoking write on betrayal. Congrats on the win, sharita
Sirak Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 7:40 AM
Wow! Stunning writing! Love the line "searching for words in pageless books", so powerful. Congrats on your win.
Kayode Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 7:28 AM
Congrats on the win Sharita .A great one is this.
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