Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Jubilee

On this first month, elation greets
The vibrant  thrill of  hearth’s delight
Where lips chant for answered blessings;
Upon  an evening, frosty white :
A hug, a cuddle through hallways
Enshrines  this new round  its pleasure,
That gifts from one’s soul would inspire
Sweet Jubilee beyond vessels of time!


Contest 543: Brian Strand

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John Gondolf January 9, 2019 at 2:09 PM Nette, I enjoyed this uplifting poem of jubilation. Best of luck in the contest. John

Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2019 at 4:32 AM - Happy birthday, Nette !!! - Love it :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman January 8, 2019 at 3:53 PM Love this, believe happy birthday is in order, wishing you all the best Harry

Vijay Pandit January 8, 2019 at 7:07 AM Rhythms of joy in this lovely poem. Good flow and tone as always..that last line says it all. Well done, Nette.

Tom Cunningham January 7, 2019 at 10:31 PM Such joy in your verse Nette, I see happy birthday is in order, I hope you have a lovely day. Tom.

Eve Roper January 7, 2019 at 9:57 PM https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=35114&PoetID=57242 poetry blog just for you : ) birthday wishes to you from your friends

Susan Ashley January 7, 2019 at 9:54 PM Your joyous poem of such vivid and exquisite imagery and emotion makes my heart leap, Nette. Best wishes for a win and Happy Birthday.. ~Susan

Noel Onat January 7, 2019 at 7:05 PM A gleeful, intimate expression of what lies within your heart and pen!

Eve Roper January 7, 2019 at 6:29 PM Happy Birthday <3 hope your being spoiled on these memorable day. Beautiful imagery and feeling, beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*