Judith S Poet Rhyme

Joyous Melodies

Bright notes in the beat of your heart’s refrain
Changed chords of my sad soul once strummed in pain
Compose for me only sweet melodies
Let’s dance, my love, an amorous reprise.

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2/13/2018

Written for Contest: Romance in 4 Lines
Sponsor:  Silent One

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Line Gauthier February 18, 2018 at 3:18 PM Lovely rhythmic beauty. Congrats for a most deserving win, Judy.

Maria Williams February 16, 2018 at 12:35 AM So artistic a beautiful poem Judy. Congratulations on your placement....Maria xx

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2018 at 6:34 PM So beautiful, Judith. Congrats on a very well deserved win.

Laura Leiser February 15, 2018 at 5:51 PM This is so good, Judith, and I like that you used musical metaphors for your romantic imagery! Congrats :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. February 15, 2018 at 3:54 PM Elegant musical metaphors this lovely poem be, Judith. Very romantic write. Pure poetry. Love and joy always.

Tom Cunningham February 14, 2018 at 1:50 PM Congratulations Judith. Regards Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2018 at 12:13 PM - Lovely dance of love, Judy :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One February 14, 2018 at 9:05 AM Sweet music for two beloveds.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

Mike Gentile February 14, 2018 at 8:35 AM So sweet and melodious, Judy, a winning entry for the contest, I'm sure xxoo happy Valentine's day!

Susan Ashley February 13, 2018 at 9:34 PM Oh my dear friend Judy, this poem is absolutely gorgeous! Every romantic line is filled with lovely wooing lines. A great write that's so beautifully heartfelt. Best wishes for win!! Your NE friend. ~Susan

Lewis Raynes February 13, 2018 at 7:35 PM Dancing hearts , beautiful Judy, loved this one :) good luck in the contest

Arturo Michael February 13, 2018 at 2:43 PM You wrote this like a true musician...I love the style...the air of it...All the best Judith Judith S February 13, 2018 at 3:50 PM Thank you, dear Arturo, for your always supportive comments! ~Judy

Vijay Pandit February 13, 2018 at 12:25 PM Lovely, sweet poem, Judy..best for a win. Judith S February 13, 2018 at 3:50 PM Thank you, as always, for your kind comments Vijay!! ~ Judy