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Premiere Contest WinnerJoyous Day At the Train Station

Joyous Day At The Train Station A most absurd thing happened while I made my way to meet my morning train one sunny, summer day. While walking on the path I saw the engineer I see most every day when traveling, but near him was a box of sorts all covered with a sheet. He quickly called to me and said, "please come to meet this stray, a golden-orange tabby cat I caught along the tracks. A little irritable and fraught but genial, and he emits the sweetest mews. His fur is smooth and excellent; bright eyes diffuse green glows of iris; he's a beauty with no home." I bent and peered inside, he looked so all alone, but kindly met my eyes with such a generous meow and then moved over close to where I was. Not minding one iota when I picked him up, he fit so sweetly in my arms which I did cup and did appreciate my holding him so near. He tucked his head beneath my chin, and it was clear in order to make him my own, there was a kink... a costly act...skip work today. Then, in a wink, I called my boss, and 'knock on wood', he said okay. An unplanned meeting with my new-found pet this day gave me a special joy, and with a hug sincere, "an admirable kindness," said the engineer. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Premiere Contest: Make A Poem Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Judged: 07/12/2016 Couplet Form using Iambic Hexameter: 12 syllables and 6 feet per line
21 Required Words to Include in Poem: Absurd, appreciate, admirable, cat, caught, costly, emits, engineer, excellent golden, generous, genial, iris, iota, irritable, kindly, knock, kink, orange, over, order My poem took about 3 hours to compose between two writing sessions: evening of July 2 and morning of July 3.
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Troutman Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 10:43 PM
Wow, I tried and couldn't do it. It's a wonderful poem, very skillfully done. Congrats
Lamoureux Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 6:07 PM
Well told story, congrats on your top win.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Nice story Sandra, congrats! :)
A  Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 11:38 PM
wonderful win. skat-
Misra Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Congratulations on your top spot, Sandra. A wonderful tale told in style. The words just melded from line to line. Thoroughly deserving of the trophy.
Haight Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Thank you very much, Karam, for your supportive and uplifting comments and congrats! Sandra
Dutta Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 6:45 PM
Congrats Sandra to win top place.Hugs.
Haight Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Thank you so much, Anisha! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Sandra, congrats on your #1 top placement it is well deserved lady!!! :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 9:11 PM
Thank you very much, Luloo! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 4:48 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Sandra I knew this was a winner the first time I read it:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Yours was so very good too! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 4:48 PM
a captivating tale Sandra you aced this contest congrts on 1st place hugs
Haight Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 5:23 PM
Thank you very much, Shadow. I loved my poem to meet your wonderful challenge, and I so much appreciate my nice placement. Thanks again! Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 3:17 AM
This is lovely way of using those 21 words together. Great story telling in a strict form:)
Haight Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Thank you very much, Jo. It was challenging but fun. Hugs, Sanddra
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 6:29 PM
Sandra, you delivered this sweet poem with a loving emotional impact, especially for those of us who are cat lovers! Your mandatory words flowed seamlessly into your poem. I am sure this will do splendidly in the contest 7 ; )
Haight Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Thank you once again, Connie, for your kind and uplifting comments and nice 7 rating! I always appreciate your visits and support. Hugs, Sandra
Vaso Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 6:21 PM
I certainly wasn't expecting this! Wow, so creative, such an adorable poem and a fav for me!!! :) A7
Haight Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Thank you very much, Arthur! I am honored with your uplifting and supportive comment, Fav and 7 rating! Much appreciated! Sandra
Stebbings Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Well written Sandra, I love cat poems. I looked at this contest but have not started mine yet. Good Luck. Barry.
Haight Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 6:41 PM
Thank you very much, Barry. Somehow I just knew you loved cats! Ha Ha! I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments. Sandra
Turner Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Cute poem! I'm not really a cat person but i do respect the time and talent it took to write. Good luck in contest!
Haight Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Thank you, Daniel. I love cats, but don't have any pets at this time. Putting in the 21 words is a challenge! I appreciate your visit and supportive comments. Sandra
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