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JOYFUL JILL Nursery Rhyme

Joyful Jill is always glad* In the Lord, she’s never sad She does pray for Mom and Dad To smile, even they are mad. Joyful Jill hates being sad And she likes Jack to feel glad They both pray for Mom and Dad For good health when they get mad.
*Psalms 32:11 Be glad in the LORD, and rejoice, ye righteous: and shout for joy... November 1, 2024 4th place, "Jill Nursery Rhyme" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina; judged on 11/18/2024

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Date: 11/18/2024 12:55:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write again. Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
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Date: 11/18/2024 2:49:00 AM
Good one, Beata. Congrats on your placement in my contest. Thank you for entering. Charlie
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Date: 11/2/2024 6:09:00 PM
I like the rhyme for children. easy to understand words are chosen. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 11/1/2024 10:35:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write. Great take on Jill/Jack. Love This One... "Good luck" Looks like we both did this write. Have a blessed autumn day writing away ...............
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