Hello There Poet Rhyme

Joy She Brings

She speaks 

sweetest confections 
purest ingredients 
tastiest treats 
scrumptious delight

She sings 

cool summer breeze 
wind through my hair 
worries recede 
ray of sunlight

She sleeps 

prayers have been answered
dreams are revealed
touched by an angel
heavenly sight

My Little Girl

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Richard Lamoureux September 14, 2019 at 9:18 AM The recipe appears to have achieved perfection. What a gorgeous dedication to your daughter. Hello There September 14, 2019 at 1:03 PM I'm guessing, then, that you have one of your own :) Thank you very much, Rick!

John Hamilton September 10, 2019 at 1:01 PM Beauty is sometimes expressed in simple ways, I suspect you could easily write more complicated thoughts but choose not to, I'm the same that way, I think simple ideas are the most powerful because people can relate to them. I do write more complex writes just to keep people on their toes!lol Hello There September 10, 2019 at 3:24 PM Lol. Thank you for stopping by and for the lovely affirmation that simple expression can be worthy, too :')

Sandra Adams September 9, 2019 at 7:19 PM what a beautiful dedication for your little girl...there is no love greater than mother and child...nicely penned! Hello There September 9, 2019 at 7:57 PM Thank you, Sandra ~ she's not so little anymore ~ but, still, I recognize the gift. I am glad you stopped by and enjoyed this simple little piece :)

Arturo Michael September 9, 2019 at 3:24 PM A lovely dedication... Hello There September 9, 2019 at 7:51 PM Thank you, Arturo..

Chris Green September 9, 2019 at 7:26 AM Another beautiful poem about the love you feel for your little girl. I once wrote something that ended with, "To see true love, gaze into a mother's eyes." We have just done that by reading your wonderful poem. Hello There September 9, 2019 at 12:16 PM Thank you for your kind reply. I'm glad you are able to appreciate the simplicity in my writing.