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Joy She Brings

She speaks sweetest confections purest ingredients tastiest treats scrumptious delight She sings cool summer breeze wind through my hair worries recede ray of sunlight She sleeps prayers have been answered dreams are revealed touched by an angel heavenly sight My Little Girl

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/14/2019 9:18:00 AM

The recipe appears to have achieved perfection. What a gorgeous dedication to your daughter.

Hello There
Date: 9/14/2019 1:03:00 PM

I'm guessing, then, that you have one of your own :) Thank you very much, Rick!

John Hamilton

Date: 9/10/2019 1:01:00 PM

Beauty is sometimes expressed in simple ways, I suspect you could easily write more complicated thoughts but choose not to, I'm the same that way, I think simple ideas are the most powerful because people can relate to them. I do write more complex writes just to keep people on their toes!lol

Hello There
Date: 9/10/2019 3:24:00 PM

Lol. Thank you for stopping by and for the lovely affirmation that simple expression can be worthy, too :')

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/9/2019 7:19:00 PM

what a beautiful dedication for your little girl...there is no love greater than mother and child...nicely penned!

Hello There
Date: 9/9/2019 7:57:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra ~ she's not so little anymore ~ but, still, I recognize the gift. I am glad you stopped by and enjoyed this simple little piece :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/9/2019 3:24:00 PM

A lovely dedication...

Hello There
Date: 9/9/2019 7:51:00 PM

Thank you, Arturo..

Chris Green

Date: 9/9/2019 7:26:00 AM

Another beautiful poem about the love you feel for your little girl. I once wrote something that ended with, "To see true love, gaze into a mother's eyes." We have just done that by reading your wonderful poem.

Hello There
Date: 9/9/2019 12:16:00 PM

Thank you for your kind reply. I'm glad you are able to appreciate the simplicity in my writing.