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Joy In Permanence

Happiness, a worthy life quest, if it be permanent, igniting each node of form, in boundless rapture. Fears, desires, endless thoughts spirals, hypnotise and bemuse, holding us captive for life, until we shake free. What avail is this fleeting joy, when sorrow soon follows, teasing, taunting, torturing, whilst we trauma bond? In the void of tranquil stillness, magnetic currents rise, transmuting our consciousness, as bliss throbs renew. In being and so becoming, soul wisens, heart glistens, as God’s boundless grace in-pours, making us complete. 01-February-2022 Give Me A Shadorma Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sotto Poet Syllable count: 3-5-3-3-7-5 checked on PS
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Goldsmith Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Joy in permanence" is a lovely write and picture. Love your ending. Have a great/blessed day .......................
Seeker Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 7:24 PM
Thank you, dear Paula!
Agustin Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 6:09 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this: wisdom-filled worthy of reflection. God bless you.
Seeker Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 6:45 AM
Thank you, Beata!
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 11:15 AM
Outstanding work in this form. Congrats for making the winner list.
Seeker Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:57 PM
Thanks, Andrea! :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 9:51 AM
This is wonderful Seeker - the quest of life - to be complete in God - perfectly articulated. You have wonderfully expressed that seeking happiness without God is an empty quest indeed. Congratulations on this humble, marvelous gem. Sending you blessings!
Seeker Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:56 PM
Thank you dear Sam!
Poet Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest ( Give me a Shadorma). Your submission is stunning Unseeking. Blessings
Seeker Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 8:09 AM
So happy you enjoyed, Sotto! Thanks for hosting. I got to learn a new poetry form because of the contest
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