Joy For One - Minimalism

snowflake
journey over
resting
a child’s tongue
tingling


©12/14/2018

 Minimalism Poetry Contest
sponsor – Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 6:10 PM
'amazing!!! Congrats, John
Gauthier Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 5:41 AM
Awesome perspective with respect to the life of a snowflake. Love it. Congrats on your podium finish, John.
Wolf Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 6:18 PM
The evanescence you've imaged is everlasting. Perfectly crafted, John! Congrats on your win in the contest, and Best of the Season. ~ Gershon
Lawless Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Thanks Gershon, for you high praise and comment
Awtry Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 4:52 PM
Congratulations! A winter gem :)
Lawless Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:32 PM
Thanks P.S., I appreciate your stopping by
Hopkins-Drewer Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Simple, Christmas and yet not too Christmas - and our children are very important to us.
Lawless Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:31 PM
Well Cecelia, christmas, winter, and kids do seem to bring us back to simpler moments. Great contest,
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