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Joy and Pain

love such joy the oneness two hearts as one wonderful feeling of being complete shed tears at the bitter separation dazed confusion desolate bereft pain

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2011 10:24:00 PM

I really like how you did this one, the contrast of it. I could have sworn I had seen it before too, but I see no comment of mine here. thanks for my HM in your contest. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/17/2011 4:10:00 PM

A sad statement on the fate of many couples, Jack. Excellent use of the tetractys form as well. Best wishes in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2011 6:02:00 PM

the highs and lows of luv my friend.. an awesome use of the form Jack..good luck in this cool contest..wow..one..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/16/2011 1:55:00 PM

Niced expressions of love's completeness and pain at the separation, I think pain and love go together, jack

James Foulk

Date: 6/16/2011 12:22:00 PM

a wonderful piece of beautiful poetry. thank you for commenting on mr robin pays a visit.

Kash Poet

Date: 6/16/2011 12:09:00 PM

What a brilliant write from you Jack...enjoyed.Best wishes.