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Joy and Pain

love
such joy
the oneness
two hearts as one
wonderful feeling of being complete

shed tears at the bitter separation
dazed confusion
desolate
bereft
pain

Copyright © Jack Horne | Year Posted 2011

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Andrea Dietrich

June 21, 2011 at 10:24 PM

I really like how you did this one, the contrast of it. I could have sworn I had seen it before too, but I see no comment of mine here. thanks for my HM in your contest. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

June 17, 2011 at 4:10 PM

A sad statement on the fate of many couples, Jack. Excellent use of the tetractys form as well. Best wishes in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 16, 2011 at 6:02 PM

the highs and lows of luv my friend.. an awesome use of the form Jack..good luck in this cool contest..wow..one..

June 16, 2011 at 1:55 PM

Niced expressions of love's completeness and pain at the separation, I think pain and love go together, jack

June 16, 2011 at 12:22 PM

a wonderful piece of beautiful poetry. thank you for commenting on mr robin pays a visit.

June 16, 2011 at 12:09 PM

What a brilliant write from you Jack...enjoyed.Best wishes.

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