Joy

Wind
Rocks, mud
Bugs in grill
Driver whoops, hollers
Jeep's happiness is off-roading

carfibonacci

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Neva Romaine

March 25, 2015 at 8:44 AM

Hey Sean, a warm welcome to Poetry Soup. This is a very expressive poem filled with great imagery and in so few words. Well done!! Be Blessed, Neva

Daver Austin

March 24, 2015 at 9:08 AM

Great! Short and to the point. Very effective. Congrats on the selection. daver

Skat A

March 18, 2015 at 10:54 PM

Nice form, Sean, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Sean Rackley

March 18, 2015 at 2:31 PM

I opted to count the title as my first line and first syllable in the Fib sequence.

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