Joy

There once was a girl by the name Joy   
who got joy whenever she'd annoy.  
Her poor little brother 
she swapped for another.  
Now; him, too, she would love to destroy.

familyjoylimerick

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Elizabeth Wesley

December 2, 2011 at 7:28 AM

I know the feeling; it used to overwhelm me! Great limerick my friend.

David William Breidenthal

November 11, 2011 at 2:31 AM

WOWZA! This poem is JOYOUS!

Don Johnson

November 6, 2011 at 10:01 PM

Ah well she is keeping things interesting, great verse here i see ...twisty ending delight 4 me...on ya mate...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 1, 2011 at 9:19 PM

I might know her John..haha.. nice Limerick but not a nice Joy... she needs some training luv.. luv your rhyme...

Kaila B.A

November 1, 2011 at 5:23 AM

hi John, thnx for stopping by and leaving me that cute comment ~ :) i like ur poems, you made me smile~:)

Debbie Guzzi

October 30, 2011 at 3:15 PM

There once was a girl named miss Joy/who delighted some she annoyed/and her little brother/she swapped for another/For him she was out to destroy..it's NOt easy BUt if you can get to hear it in 5 short lines you can learn to use iambic unstress/STRESS...in longer forms! Keep at it and I AM NOT always right Andria dietrich is way better at meter! HUGS