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Joy


There once was a girl by the name Joy   
who got joy whenever she'd annoy.  
Her poor little brother 
she swapped for another.  
Now; him, too, she would love to destroy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/2/2011 7:28:00 AM
I know the feeling; it used to overwhelm me! Great limerick my friend.
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Date: 11/11/2011 2:31:00 AM
WOWZA! This poem is JOYOUS!
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Date: 11/6/2011 10:01:00 PM
Ah well she is keeping things interesting, great verse here i see ...twisty ending delight 4 me...on ya mate...
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Date: 11/1/2011 9:19:00 PM
I might know her John..haha.. nice Limerick but not a nice Joy... she needs some training luv.. luv your rhyme...
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Date: 11/1/2011 5:23:00 AM
hi John, thnx for stopping by and leaving me that cute comment ~ :) i like ur poems, you made me smile~:)
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Date: 10/30/2011 3:15:00 PM
There once was a girl named miss Joy/who delighted some she annoyed/and her little brother/she swapped for another/For him she was out to destroy..it's NOt easy BUt if you can get to hear it in 5 short lines you can learn to use iambic unstress/STRESS...in longer forms! Keep at it and I AM NOT always right Andria dietrich is way better at meter! HUGS
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Date: 10/30/2011 10:39:00 AM
Ha ha very good x
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Date: 10/30/2011 9:56:00 AM
Wonderfully witty poetry, John. Great use of the limerick form too! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/30/2011 6:15:00 AM
LOL, enjoyed this witty piece, John
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Date: 10/30/2011 5:43:00 AM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this one very much...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/30/2011 5:13:00 AM
Good Limerick here John.Enjoyed.
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Date: 10/30/2011 1:08:00 AM
Her name was very unfitting for her negative personality. heehee.
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Date: 10/29/2011 7:39:00 PM
John, hehhe... thank you for the smile..., Have yourself a wonderful night ;-) God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 10/29/2011 7:27:00 PM
nasty is first word comes mind. nice to see ya, John Smith, Nancy Jones :)
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