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Joy

he leans on the palm at waters edge sated smoking he watches her walk walk away his lips taste like her scent his hands want to hold her again now naked cherished against him another hour another hour he squats and looks away to the waves a deep lost longing takes his breath his eyes sting with hot tears he cries for the first time with joy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2010 3:06:00 PM
Excellent write with much emotion on the male side for a change to show they can cry too ... when the right button is pushed to let their emotions flow... lovely heartfelt write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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