Journey's End

Journey's End by Shane Cogan (September 2013)
    

Silently we stood tall
The sun’s dawn chill on our backs
We gathered our last few belongings
The grey skies swirled over us
Onwards and upwards we walked
Little to do, we merely talked
Oh, the endless array of colours
Oh, the senseless decay of society 

The autumn countryside air fed us
Fresh golden crisp sounds under our feet, our hooting horn
Azure skies shone now, the greyness vanished
Reaching up high, seeking solace…we moved on
Teaching us it was, freaking us out…we moved on
But there is no escape ever for a nomad
A wanderer: she pondered…and I squandered
Oh, there it was again
Oh, the planet we sought

I breathed in the warm dusk air
She breathed in the moonlit sky
Ravens swarmed over us, creating one dark cloud
Bats vibrated, as feeding time commenced
Harvest gatherers signalled night time
A lonely police siren echoed sleep time 
Then we both felt its glaze upon our faces
It stole our smile
It sapped our energy
Oh, we could not move
Oh, yet only approve

Resting, we had no choice but too stargaze
We shifted our tired bodies
We emptied our final belongings
The crystal full moon had hypnotised us
The sun’s distant tale had teased us
The endless blanket of stars now warmed us 

An epic sky tale of foe and friend had begun
We gazed. We starred. We dreamed
Nothing could have prepared us
Nothing had been written about its glory
Indigo colours encircled its core
Hazy lights acted as a sky highway
Interlinked, interconnected, intergalactic
First our planet, then their planet
We gave way, we gave in
Our journey at an end
A new one to begin
We had found our planet
Our people
Our nature
We smiled 
We blinked
We spoke
We said: Welcome home

                                               For the EPIC (OLD/NEW) Poem contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/25/2013 12:21:00 PM
I loved the celestial imagery in this poem. Just beautiful! This was a great entry for the "epic" poems contest. Congratulations, on your win, as well! Wonderful work, Shane!...Thank you for the nice comments. I really appreciate it!
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Shane Cogan
Date: 9/28/2013 4:21:00 PM
Thanks, Kelly for your positive comments.
Date: 9/25/2013 4:32:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Shane
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Shane Cogan
Date: 9/25/2013 11:53:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram!
Date: 9/24/2013 4:59:00 PM
Hi Shane Again.......Congrats................. Love~SKAT~
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Date: 9/24/2013 11:34:00 AM
Hi Shane, :)Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my EPIC contest with this amazing deep imagery. Exactly what I was looking for. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Wartime Memories " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15948&PoetID=18720 always & forever **LINDA
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Shane Cogan
Date: 9/25/2013 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Linda. I enjoyed writing for your contest. More contests please. Shane
Date: 9/20/2013 3:50:00 PM
wow! Shane, it is beautiful..... and warm.... good luck in the contest.....SKAT
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Date: 9/25/2013 11:52:00 AM
Thanks, Skat. Much appreciated. Shane
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