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Copyright Protected, ID 03-1710-713-02
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Written, March 02, 2025
For the International Contest, Open Poetry II
Sponsor, Charlotte Puddifoot , Judged 03/09/2025

Fourth Place

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I dream of journeys to contemplate
of driving alone on a lined snow-laden road
with no destination
of gliding through the wilderness on a train
its whistle a haunting sound
over bridges with deep water moving beneath
and boreal trees all around
of flying in a diminutive airplane over the ocean
with no land to observe
lost in the blue
listening to every creaking sound
of floating in a sailboat across the sea
seeking my true north in tranquility

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Date: 3/10/2025 12:22:00 PM
Dear Constance, your poem is beautiful and your last line resonates with me; "seeking my true north in tranquility". A splendid, mindful, contemplative piece. Congratulations for your success in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2025 7:11:00 PM
Susan, thank you so much for the compliment, comment, and congratulations, I love that line too, blessings ~
Date: 3/9/2025 10:36:00 AM
So beautiful and thought-provoking. What is humanity without dreams of its own definition of freedom? Loved the imagery of this piece, and the longing that tugged at my heartstrings.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/10/2025 7:12:00 PM
Hiba, thank you so much for the compliment, and great comment, appreciate, blessings ~
Date: 3/5/2025 11:01:00 AM
Hello Constance , this made me feel like i was on a sailboat. Love & Friendship, /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/8/2025 11:09:00 AM
Hello Constance, You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2025 3:20:00 PM
Darlene, thank you for the compliment, blesssings ~
Date: 3/4/2025 12:09:00 AM
It reads of carefree journey without travail. Thank you for sharing these scenes of joy.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2025 3:21:00 PM
Hilda, thank you for the comment and compliment, blessings ~
Date: 3/3/2025 11:18:00 PM
So beautifully penned dear Constance. "Lost in the blue listening to every creaking sound", loved it. How have you been doing my friend? Hugs... ~ Ani
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Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2025 3:21:00 PM
Ani, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs and blessings ~
Date: 3/3/2025 9:52:00 AM
Dear Constance, I feel like I took such a peaceful, reflective journey. I believe each of your lines invites such deep contemplation. I love how you capture the beauty of quiet moments and finding one's true north. Wonderful Read! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2025 3:22:00 PM
Daniel, thank you for the nice comment and compliment, blessings ~
Date: 3/3/2025 2:08:00 AM
Nice.
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Date: 3/7/2025 3:22:00 PM
Byeol, thank you for the compliment, blessings ~
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