Journey Without Movement

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“What is this strange place, we find ourselves in We’re trapped in the open, yet free within” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ As subject looking at object Ego impulse makes thoughts suspect Nudging us in paths self-serving Scars on soul reflect this defect Choosing ourself as deserving Feral cravings clip our soul’s wing Until we enter our heart’s womb Therein to love beats, in joy swing Separateness, ignorance tomb Layer by layer, which we comb Dwelling thereafter, in the void As bliss anoints us with aplomb No longer thus, by ego toyed Vaporised self, is by love buoyed Magnetic heat, rapture blissful Transmutes soul; delusion destroyed 01-December-2021

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Date: 11/30/2021 9:55:00 PM
Ahhh, a Touched pen! I was quite charged as I began to read as it’s in the last 30 hrs that I invented a new word. Going with sub and universal consciousness, I came up with, “I conscience,” defined as an inward soul-seeking, slower and deeper circumpection(beyond quick reactionary ego just as you explain here…hmmm?
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/1/2021 8:07:00 AM
Check your soup mail please
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/1/2021 2:10:00 AM
What is the true ‘I’ but God consciousness Itself?
Date: 11/30/2021 9:31:00 PM
If we all did this "Choosing ourself as deserving" therapists and psychiatrists would be out of jobs.
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Date: 11/30/2021 9:52:00 PM
Ultimately recognising oneness, that God in-dwells all forms and we too are His essence … delusion is dispelled
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