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Once upon a time, basking in sublime gardens of Eden blissful essence of presence did as was bidden soul ingrained with delight from head to toe imbibing divine elixir, joyful heart aglow humming a happy melodious verse in resonance with pulse of the universe feeling complete, in heightened bliss replete until head and heart cracked, love sank to our feet Reworded, we may say we shifted away from oneness to a deluded, imaginary stature of ego separateness presence feeling limited, imperfect and flawed earthbound till soul be healed and thawed pursuing desire in maya borne illusion until exhaustion gets us to the recognition that joy eternal lies not in the transient ephemeral we again rekindle love in heart, with cognition spherical In this journey without movement, we take off ego mask for which no doing need be done, so easy is this task our heart which is broken, due to love forsaken shakes off deluded facade, when shaken shifting by cessation into stillness and silence awakening inner polarity of mind-body sentience fabric of ignorance torn, ego shorn, now twice born suffused by love magnetism warm, we once again adorn 14-June-2021 Writing prompt ‘flawed’ poetry contest Sponsor: Constance La France employing the following words once only: flawed, mask, broken, cracked facade, torn, illusion, imperfect

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Date: 6/25/2021 4:52:00 PM
Seeker, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Flawed _ Challenge with your wonderful poem. Good use of the required words, peace _ Constance
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Date: 6/25/2021 8:18:00 PM
Thank you for the recognition, Constance! Always happy to participate in your inspiring contests!
Date: 6/24/2021 8:39:00 PM
Wonderful creation. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/24/2021 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 6/14/2021 9:05:00 PM
Thanks a ton. Now I understood. God bless!
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Date: 6/14/2021 10:11:00 AM
Simply amazing! Waned to ask what you mean by alignment of head and heart. Really curious, never heard of it.
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Date: 6/14/2021 6:40:00 PM
Head = ego (identity) driven, while heart = love (God vibration). The surrender scriptures speak of is melding of head with heart, in balance. Neither self-serving selfishness nor an empath self-sacrificing but oozing compassion, unconditional, non-judgmental, accepting all as they are and all that is, as is.
Date: 6/14/2021 2:08:00 AM
I don't think this contest is for me. You have written a great poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 6/14/2021 2:46:00 AM
A breeze for you, Victor, I’m sure you can better it even with one hand tied! ;)

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