Journey Through Oblivion

Roaming around the mysterious domain of oblivion 
I crept into the caves of pleasure
The crimson joy enveloped me in utter passion
I tried to stand up, but
The lustful hug of the darkness
 Prevented me; I prevented myself
From getting an ordained release
Swarms of gothic darkness covered me from tip to toe
They were thirsty; they sucked the present out of me
Myriad ancient tales of kings of emperors of their concubines
Steadily peeled me out, the ecstasy I felt in the pain…
I ran towards the dense and dark woods
With outstretched arms
Because I wanted to hug darkness
 To drown in darkness
 To elicit darkness from the trees from the herbs
 The mythical herbs
That often provided immortality to mystic lovers
The treetops lapped me up in their bosoms
I smiled like a child wept like a child crept
In the wombs of myth of darkness

I know not where to bury my corpse of present 
My putrefied me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/3/2014 8:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Excellent piece! Kika
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Date: 9/4/2014 6:56:00 AM
Thanks Kika, I express my heartfelt gratitude to you for reading my work. Prasenjit
Date: 9/3/2014 1:43:00 PM
Wow powerful poem. Congratulations.
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 9/4/2014 6:57:00 AM
Thanks. looking forward to have further exchanges between you and me.
Date: 8/29/2014 10:44:00 AM
Excellent write Prasenjit. Verlena
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Date: 8/29/2014 10:46:00 AM
Thanks Verlena, glad you liked this one.
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Date: 8/29/2014 10:45:00 AM
Thanks, Pandita, i was craving to let out my feelings, and here's the product. Thanks again
Date: 8/29/2014 10:25:00 AM
WOW! What a magnificent write this truly is! The imagery is awesome, my friend! My kind of poetry! Bravo! Pandita
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Date: 8/29/2014 10:48:00 AM
Thanks, Pandita, i was craving to let out my feelings, and here's the product. Thanks again
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