Funom Makama Poet Imagism

Journey Through Coma

Life and death on a video game
their punching buttons not responsive
to hospital gadgets and electromagnetic technologies.
Consciousness is pinned to extinctions wall
and disappearance in court
advocating for a permanent roommate.

Every stepping win shows the direction
to which this soul is destined.
Existence is in a pitiful mood
with just its left hand held.
The firmness of such hold, serving as a marker
to its needed victory or unfortunate loss.

One move and another, death leads
but the big win finally comes
and the abstract world of the spirits
hit itself and weep in anguish
as the soul marries the body 
to activate a living being once again.

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Skat A January 1, 2016 at 11:17 AM Funom,, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:55 AM Thank you so so very much SKAT A

Hansteven Selfa December 28, 2015 at 12:06 PM Im now crying. :'( Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:54 AM hahahaha... Thank you so so very much Selfa

Quincy Mac December 26, 2015 at 7:56 PM "Every stepping win shows the direction to which this soul is destined" very true, the winning affect of the conceptual reason of wanting a certain result. Gets us thinking about whats in store for our soul. Great piece of writing. Quincy Mac Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:54 AM Thank you so so very much Mac

Poet Destroyer A December 25, 2015 at 10:26 PM Hi Funom, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:53 AM Thank you so much Linda... I wish you a prosperous year and more years of fulfillment and peace. Sorry for reading this late, nonetheless, the year is still fresh and good tidings are still flying in the air. Thank you so much once again.

Andrea Dietrich December 25, 2015 at 4:55 PM a very interesting write!! You write so descriptively. Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:50 AM Thank you so so very much Andrea

Njeri Hunjeri December 25, 2015 at 7:22 AM This is an emotive write....just thinking about the title, it gives all the pains..great piece! Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:50 AM Thank you so so very much Njeri

Emile Pinet December 24, 2015 at 6:06 PM An ethereal journey, from oblivion to conciseness at the edge of sanity. Emile. Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:49 AM Thank you so so very much Emile

Eve Roper December 24, 2015 at 3:04 PM Enjoyed reading this deep Imagism, Funom. Blessing sir Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:49 AM Thank you so so very much Eve

Bl Devnath December 24, 2015 at 11:24 AM Very deeply pained. Loved always my lovely friend,bl Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:48 AM Thank you so so very much Devnath

Francis Osho December 24, 2015 at 10:38 AM i love it funom Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:48 AM Thank you so so very much Francis Osho

Janice Canerdy December 24, 2015 at 9:01 AM Very thought-provoking, profound Janice Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 8:47 AM Thank you so so very much Janice