Journey Into the Nightfire

You've got to get ready for your journey.
Men to the left woman to the right.
To bed early, sleep well my children.
Night had fallen, I was 12.
Only the darkness;
without love or mercy.
I heard a voice rising up,
woke them dragging them from their dreams.
"Fire I can see fire!"
Some dared answer him,
we must keep going.
We had never understood one another so clearly. 

Several thousand prisoners went through the gate,
never came back.
The look in his eyes as they stared into mine never left me,
I stood among the prayer congregation observing it like a stranger.
A world without God;
You who have betrayed whom You allowed to be tortured.
On the contrary I felt very strong
stronger than the Almighty.
Powerful yet at the same time so broken.
My eyes were open and I was alone,
I had ceased to be anything but ashes

a/n: this was a poem we had to write off of the book Night, about the genocide in Germany
of the Jews.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Megens Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 7:41 AM
an awe inspiring piece maddie for a young woman you have big grown thoughts keep writing
Lachica Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 7:47 AM
Great Madison....reminds me of the movie. I like the line " I felt very strong, stronger than the Almighty"...
Shango Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 2:14 AM
Shuddering memories ... a nice reprise of the situation ... love the imageries ... of each sad evocation. Peace and love
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