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Journey Has Begun

Life is not about being perfect, as there is no end to it, Yes I can just be human, and half the battle is won. I am surrounded by shadows of people, good and bad, Yes I can make my choices, and will have regrets none. If I try and don’t succeed, I won’t quit and be quiet, Yes I shall work harder, until the job is done. The path of life is tough, with no strings of velvet, Yes I shall bear the odds, clouds can’t swallow the sun. There are times when I get hurt, and I am in silent tears, Yes I will save my heart from the unwanted one. Let not my foes conquer my inner soul and win, Yes I will change myself, and the journey has begun… October 30, 2018. In Response to the Poem If Sponsor : Silent One

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Date: 1/25/2021 1:20:00 PM
Had same idea when wrote lifes journey yes l agree your born you live you die its about what you do while your here nice write davidscott
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Date: 3/28/2019 10:47:00 PM
I love every line ~ FAVE
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 3/28/2019 10:56:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 11/26/2018 12:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "In response to IF ...." poems, Meenakshi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 6:31:00 PM
Nicely done, Meenakshi, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
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Date: 11/25/2018 10:35:00 AM
Ahh those silent tears.... Nice take on the contest Meenakshi.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 11/8/2018 7:23:00 PM
Nice one Meenakshi
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